BR 1-07: The Fairgroung Ghost

The main character is Jake Hubbard. He saw a poster on his way to school. It is about the fair in his town. That night, he asked his father and mother. However they are busy. Next, he asked his old sister. She was free. But she take her boyfriend. At last, they went to the fairground. Then she and herboyfriend headed straight for the Tunnel of Love. Jake was shocked. Jake wanted something really scary. He found the ghost train attraction. People shrieked. The attraction was in darkness. He was delighted. Then the train went around the final bend and out popped a little ghost. But the little ghost was not scary. He was still laughing. A strange man asked him. "What's so funny?" Jake said. "The little ghost!" He was a Ghost Inspector. The Gost Inspector went to see the owner of the ghost train. The owner called for the little ghost. They had not laughed. The Ghost Inspector want to gauge the little ghost's scarry. Ghost test began. The little ghhost screamed. The Inspector checked it. He said. "Not scary at all". The little ghost is feeling a depressed. Jake took for the little ghost. Jake dscided to take the ghost for a ride. The first they rode on a merry-go-round. But the little ghost was scared it. Next Jake decided to try the roller coaster instead. Jake like it. At first, the little ghost did love it. But then the ride started... Jake waved to everyone in the fairground below. The little ghost could not look. After that, the little ghost left the roller coaster a very sorry spook. Just then, Jake had an idea!! They went to one place. Where are we going? The place is not scary. The little gost closed my eyes all the way. Then, Jake said. "You can open youe eyes." "...now!" "AAAAAGGGGHHHH!" screamed the little ghost, as it caught sught of its own reflection. It rushed out of the tent, wailing at the top of its voice. "AAAAGGGGHHHH!!!!!" The eerie howls of the little ghost echoed around the fairground. Nearly everyone was terrified. Jake ran after the little ghost. "Come back!" he cried. "Ican not!" said the little ghost. Then the little ghost stopped suddenly. "That scary ghost was me?" Jake and the little ghost went to find the owner of the ghost train. But the owner of the ghost train had not even noticed the little ghost terrify the fairground. Jake pleaded with the man to test the ghost again. The man agreed. Everyone watched the test. The little ghost took a deep breath, lifted its arms and screamed. It was big and scared voice!!! The Ghost Inspector had to admit that the little ghost was terrifying. The owner said "Wwlcome back!" You will new star of the show. After that, the ghost train became the busiest ride in the fairground. Jake for every ride free, thanks to his friend, the fairground ghost.
I want to meet the little ghost!! He is very cute! The warmth of friendship is transmitted in this story.

(reference)
Sims, L. (2002). The fairground Ghost. London: Usborne Publishing Ltd.

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