Essays 1-01b

My name is Ayaka. I am nineteen years old. I am going to KGU. I am from Uto, Kumamoto. I have father, mother and young sister. My father is working in dentist. My mother is a housewife. My sister is a high school student. We get along with each other. I like to listen to music. I listen to music every day. The music to which I often listen to is Western music and Japanese music. My favorite musician is Beyonce, Avril Lavigne and YUI. Their music is very nice. Do you often listen to music? If you like music, let’s sing together.
I like to eat. My favorite food is strawberries, sweets and hamburgers, but I also like Japanese food, for example, miso soup, sushi and natto. Do you like Japanese food? Japanese food is very delicious. My favorite sweets is cake and custard pudding. What food do you recommend in your country? I am looking forward to very much.
I want to go sightseeing in your country. Please, tell me about famous spots. I want to go various places. I like go shopping. My favorite shop is in PARCO and Crea. I want to buy many clothes and souvenir. I also, want to learn about your country, for example, customs, history and language. I study hard. I teach you Japanese. Please, teach me language. It seems to be difficult, but I like English. It doesn’t give it out. Do you like Japan? Japan is very good country. I want you to come to like Japan. I am looking forward to the home stay very much. See you.




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Thank you for your comments.
Let's go resutaurant!! I'm looking forward to it.
My favorite shop is in PARCO and Crea (maybe wrong spell. sorry.)
I am freedome!
My favorite food is sushi and natto!!
My favorite dessert is... mmm...
cake and custard puding! I love sweet♪♪